My new Dark Magic Deck

This is my new made deck (YU-GI-OH wc 08) rate it for me if its any good and im looking for someone to test it on. post here !

45 Cards

Monsters 19

Dark Magician X3 Key Card
Breaker Magical swordsman
Buster Blader
Chaos Command Magician
Dark eradicator Warlock (im thinking about taking this out)
Dark magician girl
Dark magician of Chaos
Dark red Enchanter
Magicians Valkyria x2
Old Vindictive Magician x2
Silent Magician LV4
Silent Magician LV8
Skilled Dark Magician x2
Skilled White Magician (this is maybe going out too)

Spells 16

Dark Magic Attack
Dark Magic Curtain
Dedication through Light and Darkness
Heavy Storm
Lightning Vortex
Magic Formula
Magical Dimension x2
Monster Reborn (Can i use this in tournaments?)
MST
Polymerization
Sage,s Stone
Stray Lambs
Sword of Revealing light
Thousand Knives
Yami

Traps 10

Bottomles Trap Hole
Dimensional Prison
Magic Cylinder
Magicians Circle
Miracle Restoring
Mirror Force
Pitch-Black Power Stone
Ready for Intercepting (this card is a real lifesaver (litteraly) against cards like light vortex)
Sakuretsu Armor
Trap Hole

Fusion Deck 1
Dark Paladin

Why Dark magician as a Key Card?

Cus it is the base of almost all my cards like DM girl,DE warlock,DM of Chaos and so on.

I think its pretty decent but im open for suggestions.

Might I add how far are you from the game lol.

well i like dm deck but i dont think it is good enough to take on some other deck duelist here uses. its better to take out the lvl monster(might get dead draw and try to make it 40 cards)

KWC wrote:

Might I add how far are you from the game lol.

Im in world 3 world of civilization but i got most cards from my friend tru trading

40 Cards

Monsters 19

Dark Magician X3 Key Card
Dark Eradicator Warlock x2
Dark magician girl x2
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Magicians Valkyria x3
Old Vindictive Magician x1
Skilled Dark Magician x2
Phantom of Chaos x2
apprentice magician x2
crystal seer x1
sangan x1

Spells 15

Thousand Knives x2
Dark Magic Attack x2
Magical Dimension x2
Diffusion Wave-Motion x2
Dark Magic Curtain
Heavy Storm
Lightning Vortex
Monster Reborn
MST
Sage's Stone
Sword of Revealing light

Traps 6

Torrential Tribute
Magic Cylinder
Magicians Circle x3
Mirror Force