Poetry because Chou asked nicely

Here's one of my poems <.<

Drop Bombs

The beats move people in every which way
Every punch has a different pay
The hands move, pinpointing the mitts
It is not the same as boxing with kicks
The mitt holder exclaims "You're so intense"
As I move my hands, it's merely happenstance
Focusing heavily on what I am throwing
Imagining faces, empowering what I am doing
People who've wronged me, even subtly
Are an inspiration to throw things more prominently
This is a release from daily pressures
Hopefully we will get support from many others

Yeah it's weird I know

LOL? I asked you nicely? XD Lmao ;O


Anyway.. O_O awesome poem. xD And you present these poems to "that certain girl" right? ;x no wonder~

Umm, the poem seems to be about fighting or boxing? Or it seems that your fighting your way to reach a girl's heart?

O_o this poem's about boxing lol idk what you guys are thinking

I read it earlier without logging in. XD

Yeah I see boxing, and it's written well, cause it flows. And the boxer has things that wronged him but he becomes stronger in his art due to it.

Also I can see a person being hurt in a specific way, but it strengthens him to try reaching the top in his chosen art, maybe with some support from people who haven't hurt him during his life or journey.

Too much analyzing?