Dragon Deck (Needs some major fixing)

This was my first deck that I made on this game. I'm taking a liking to it but I need some advice to improve it.

Deck: 42

Monsters: 26
Blackland Fire Dragon
Dark Magician
Koumori Dragon
Luster Dragon
Meteor Dragon
Red Eyes Black Dragon
Summoned Skull
Axe Dragonute
Blizzard Dragon
Buster Blader
Cyber Dragon x3
Decoy Dragon
Element Dragon
Felgrand Dragon
Guardian Angel Joan
Horus the Black Flame Dragon Lv6
Horus Lv8
Masked Dragon
Red Eyes B. Chick
The Creator
Thunder Dragon x3
Tyrant Dragon

Spells: 11

Card Trader
Different Dimension Capsule
Different Dimension Gate
Fusion Gate
Gold Sarcophagus
Mausoleum of the Emperor
Mountain
Mystical Space Typhoon
Polymerization x2
Terraforming

Traps: 5

A Rival Appears
Dimensional Prison
Karma Cut
Trap Hole
Mirror Force


Looking back I can see a few mistakes already, but I'll go with suggestions first.

You have many monsters but few traps and spells maybe you should add more traps or spells

First of all make the to 40 cards only.
That will help you ALOT.

I'll give this a 4/10

1) There are too many cards

2) You have little Magic cards, and too many Monsters

3) This deck is is too cluttered.

4) This deck just focuses on Damaging the life points..

5) You need some strategy.

*I'll try to fix this up by tomorrow.

hmmm u have too many cards i recomend 40-42 and u have some cards in there that u really dont need. and the traps u have in there are not that good i think evryone mostly use this six trap crads
mirror force - sakuretsu armor - trap hole - dark bribe - magic cylinder - torriental tribute

Yeah, I just came from playing pokemon and it's a BIG change. I partly fixed it, but I'm still working on it.

Here's my improved version of your deck. Hope you like it!

Deck 41





Monsters 18:

Armed Dragon LV3 x3
Armed Dragon LV5 x2
Armed Dragon LV7 x1
Blizzard Dragon x2
Dark Ruler Vandalgyon x1
Decoy Dragon x1
Infernal Dragon x2
Masked Dragon x3
Mirage Dragon x1
Twin-Headed Behemoth x1
Tyrant Dragon x1

*fusion
FGD x3

Magic 18:

Creature Swap x2
Dragon's Mirror x2
Foolish Burial x1
Gold Sarchophagus
Heavy Storm x1
Level Up! x1
Lightning Vortex x1
Monster Reborn x1
Mystical Space Typhoon x1
Nobleman of Crossout x1
Polymerization x1
Smashing Ground x1
Stamping Destruction x2
Swords Of Revealing Light x1
The Graveyard in the Fourth Dimension x1

Trap 5:

Mirror Force x1
Negate Attack x1
Trap Jammer x1
Solemn Judgement x1
Royal Decree x1



*notable stuff:

• 
  - I thought of using the Armed Dragons instead of Horus because the Armed Dragon LV3 can be special summoned when Masked Dragon is destroyed by Battle. And when you special summon the Armed Dragon you can automatically special summon Armed Dragon LV5 when it is your turn.
  
  - Dark Ruler Vandalgyon can be Special Summoned when you cancel out an effect with a Counter Trap Card (whether it be Magic,Trap or an Effect of a Monster). The Effect that Dark Ruler Vandalgyon gets depends on what you canceled out (if its a monster effect, a trap card, or a magic card). Thats why Solemn Judgement and Trap Jammer are there. *You may also put Magic Jammer if you want.
  
  - For Decoy Dragon, you could use Foolish Burial and put a level 7 or higher leveled monster to the graveyard. So that if your Decoy Dragon gets attacked you may special summon a level 7 or higher leveled Dragon from your graveyard.
  
  - You also have Dragon's Mirror in there so you could summon FGD. Dragon's Mirror lets you put out of play fusion materials for a Dragon type Fusion Monster. (Which is FGD) With FGD, you need any 5 Dragon Type Monsters for it to be fusion summoned. *Polymerization is also there so you can do the same (except it has to be from your hand or the field.)
  

*Glad to help you out dude! Just ask me if you need more help. You're always welcome!

i have an arm dragon deck too. i ll post it, but u got to tell me wat banlist u r using.

Mark Truesdale wrote:

Here's my improved version of your deck. Hope you like it!

Deck 41





Monsters 18:

Armed Dragon LV3 x3
Armed Dragon LV5 x2
Armed Dragon LV7 x1
Blizzard Dragon x2
Dark Ruler Vandalgyon x1
Decoy Dragon x1
Infernal Dragon x2
Masked Dragon x3
Mirage Dragon x1
Twin-Headed Behemoth x1
Tyrant Dragon x1

*fusion
FGD x3

Magic 18:

Creature Swap x2
Dragon's Mirror x2
Foolish Burial x1
Gold Sarchophagus
Heavy Storm x1
Level Up! x1
Lightning Vortex x1
Monster Reborn x1
Mystical Space Typhoon x1
Nobleman of Crossout x1
Polymerization x1
Smashing Ground x1
Stamping Destruction x2
Swords Of Revealing Light x1
The Graveyard in the Fourth Dimension x1

Trap 5:

Mirror Force x1
Negate Attack x1
Trap Jammer x1
Solemn Judgement x1
Royal Decree x1



*notable stuff:

• 
  - I thought of using the Armed Dragons instead of Horus because the Armed Dragon LV3 can be special summoned when Masked Dragon is destroyed by Battle. And when you special summon the Armed Dragon you can automatically special summon Armed Dragon LV5 when it is your turn.
  
  - Dark Ruler Vandalgyon can be Special Summoned when you cancel out an effect with a Counter Trap Card (whether it be Magic,Trap or an Effect of a Monster). The Effect that Dark Ruler Vandalgyon gets depends on what you canceled out (if its a monster effect, a trap card, or a magic card). Thats why Solemn Judgement and Trap Jammer are there. *You may also put Magic Jammer if you want.
  
  - For Decoy Dragon, you could use Foolish Burial and put a level 7 or higher leveled monster to the graveyard. So that if your Decoy Dragon gets attacked you may special summon a level 7 or higher leveled Dragon from your graveyard.
  
  - You also have Dragon's Mirror in there so you could summon FGD. Dragon's Mirror lets you put out of play fusion materials for a Dragon type Fusion Monster. (Which is FGD) With FGD, you need any 5 Dragon Type Monsters for it to be fusion summoned. *Polymerization is also there so you can do the same (except it has to be from your hand or the field.)
  

*Glad to help you out dude! Just ask me if you need more help. You're always welcome!

Thanks a lot for the help. I was just thinking of adding future fusion and fusion gate in.

ChrisDPG wrote:

Thanks a lot for the help. I was just thinking of adding future fusion and fusion gate in.

yeah Future Fusion is good. But I'm not too fond of the fusion gate idea.