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PostSubject: Poetry because Chou asked nicely   Mon Oct 26, 2009 8:17 pm

Here's one of my poems <.<

Drop Bombs

The beats move people in every which way
Every punch has a different pay
The hands move, pinpointing the mitts
It is not the same as boxing with kicks
The mitt holder exclaims "You're so intense"
As I move my hands, it's merely happenstance
Focusing heavily on what I am throwing
Imagining faces, empowering what I am doing
People who've wronged me, even subtly
Are an inspiration to throw things more prominently
This is a release from daily pressures
Hopefully we will get support from many others

Yeah it's weird I know
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry because Chou asked nicely   Mon Oct 26, 2009 11:20 pm

LOL? I asked you nicely? XD Lmao ;O


Anyway.. O_O awesome poem. xD And you present these poems to "that certain girl" right? ;x no wonder~
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry because Chou asked nicely   Tue Oct 27, 2009 12:54 pm

Umm, the poem seems to be about fighting or boxing? Or it seems that your fighting your way to reach a girl's heart?
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry because Chou asked nicely   Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:23 pm

O_o this poem's about boxing lol idk what you guys are thinking
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry because Chou asked nicely   Wed Oct 28, 2009 1:32 pm

I read it earlier without logging in. XD

Yeah I see boxing, and it's written well, cause it flows. And the boxer has things that wronged him but he becomes stronger in his art due to it.

Also I can see a person being hurt in a specific way, but it strengthens him to try reaching the top in his chosen art, maybe with some support from people who haven't hurt him during his life or journey.

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